Thursday 30 June 2016

100 word challenge

My reflection 
WALT use a range of parts of speech to add interest and detail.
[SC] I will be successful when I have used two or more similes.
My next steps are to achieve all my goals.
I have not used three examples of onomatopoeia and one or more examples of personification.
I have used two or more similes.

Tuesday 28 June 2016

Matariki acrostic poem.


My Reflection.
WALT write an acrostic poem.
[SC] I have wrote a sentence for each letter.
My next step is to get faster at doing my acrostic poem actually any poem.

Monday 20 June 2016

Use Your imagination.

Reflection
I felt excellent when I finished my work.
I will need help with one of the

Thursday 16 June 2016

Ksharns falling creepers 100 word challenge

 WALT: Use strategies to add detail to our writing.
[success criteria] I have used the 5 W's and an H
I have used all my senses:sight,smell,hearing,taste,touch.
I think next time I should use all my 5 W's and an H. Next time I should try to get 100 words because I only have 91 words and I only need 9 more words until I get 100 words.

Wednesday 15 June 2016

Bio Poem

                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                  K'sharn                                                                                                Friendly,annoying,rough                                                                  lover of iPad,rugby,soccer                                                  Who wonders if zombies will come out of the ground and               everyone will jump into a Volcano.                                                              Who fears Spider,Dark,Snakes                                          Who fells happy when mum lets you play on your iPad                 Who would like to play Xbox 360 all day                                        Who dreams of playing rugby league for NZ                                                                                                                                              

Anzac Day 100 word challenge











My reflection
I feel happy cause I finished my  work.
the best part was the part when it says [And it got buried like the people who went to war and died.]

King K'sharns Awsome What Am I

 WALT compare and measure length and neigh in different ways.
[Success criteria] I have measured my height and arm length in hands, meters and centimeters
I can say what shape my arms and height make me, Tall oblong.

100 word challenge the cat on the mans head.

One day I went home and there was a man sitting on the couch then I saw a cat walking into the house. It looked at me then it jumped onto the mans head the cats claws crunched into the mans hair I tried to tell him that theirs  a cat on his head but he didn't care. So then I scared the cat and then the cat jumped again and rips the man's hair right of his head he didn't fell anything. Then I noticed the cat's head in the roof I tried pulling it out but it didn't work so I told the man and then man pulled the cat out of the roof.

Tuesday 14 June 2016

A sail for Sam Reading comprehension

 My Reflection
WALT read independently for sustained periods of time
I feel fantastic because I finally have finished.
I liked the first question because it was the easiest.