Friday 19 February 2016

100 Word Challenge The Golden Key

One day as I was walking to school I saw something shining the grass. I went to go and see what it was but it was only a plastic raper. The next day when I walked to school I saw some thing sparkling like gold I didn't want to pick it up but I did I tried picking it up but it kept disappearing all the time so I looked for it. Finally I found it then it   disappearing into a cave there I found a golden key I picked it up and ran home and showed my mum...



WALT: use describing words to give our writing more meaning
I did well at my story
Next time I will use more  describing words

The Stolen Money 100 Word challenge

WALT: Use describing words to give our writing more meaning
I found this tricky because
My next steps are to

Thursday 11 February 2016

WALT:Brainstorm and write a poem using simple imagery:Publish our poems using google slides

                                              My Reflection
I was learning to write a did you ever                                                                                                             I found this easy to write but tricky to write it into google slides because I could only write one poem.
Next time I will only do one poem

Thursday 4 February 2016

Welcome post

Welcome to my year 4 learning blog. this year I am in room 15 and my teacher is Miss Massey. I enjoy  doing Maths,Reading. This year I am looking forward to be moving up more levels I hope you will enjoy my blog and leave lots of feedback.