One day as I was walking to school I saw something shining the grass. I went to go and see what it was but it was only a plastic raper. The next day when I walked to school I saw some thing sparkling like gold I didn't want to pick it up but I did I tried picking it up but it kept disappearing all the time so I looked for it. Finally I found it then it disappearing into a cave there I found a golden key I picked it up and ran home and showed my mum...
WALT: use describing words to give our writing more meaning
I did well at my story
Next time I will use more describing words
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