Wednesday 26 August 2015

Writing a Simile

                       



                                                       THE STORY OF THE RED BAT-MAN

Once upon a time there was a boy named Frankenstein. He wanted a job at the circus but when he got there he was too  late someone already got the job at the circus
He was so angry that he threw   his house on top of his car. five hours later someone called it was the ringmaster and he said you are very lucky  Frankenstein someone quit the job. Frankenstein was as happy as children laughing so hard. He got the job and he got a new name too. They called him the the red bat-man he always wanted a job at the circus and his dream came true.

I have written a simile to describe my clown. My simile is My clown can juggle as fast as the fastest animal on earth. I will try and use more similes in my other writings. I found it a bit tricky to put my similes in the right place.

2 comments:

Anonymous said...

I like your smilies

Unknown said...

You have used many interesting words to describe your clown and you've included a simile. Remember to write a capital letter at the beginning of a sentence.